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©2007-2009 =arthame
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I know this kind of picture is getting to be boring but I still love it!


The dreamer and the wine
Poet without a rhyme
A widow writer, torn apart by chains of Hell
One last perfect verse
Yet still the same old song
Oh Christ, how I hate what I have become
Take me home

Get away, run away, fly away
Lead me astray, to dreamer’s hideaway
I cannot cry ’cause the shoulder cries more
I cannot die, I, the whore for the cold world
Forgive me, I have but two faces
One for the world,
One for "God save me"
I cannot cry ’cause the shoulder cries more
I cannot die, I, the whore for the cold world

Model: :iconakyrah:
Background: from sxc.hu exactly from here
Crow: :iconshoofly-stock:

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:iconsecilkuka:
the composition is nice but you need to crop the model a little smoother. and some color changes in the background would be nice. nice pic, though.
:iconarthame:
thanks the advice ^^ im gonna make it tomorrow :)

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..A teardrop is insignificant in a pool of water, but it can touch the soul as it runs down someone’s face..


~hungarian & ~digital artist

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:iconintrud-r:
Nagyon jó ké.p lett, és szerintem nem kell kisebbre venni sokat (vagy egyáltalán), mert így nagyon jól megfelel az aranymetszési szabálynak (ha tudod mi az, ha nem akkor elmagyarázom :)).

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:iconarthame:
elmagyarázhatod igazából mert elég kezdő lennék még ilyen téren sajna ^^
és köszi :hug:

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..A teardrop is insignificant in a pool of water, but it can touch the soul as it runs down someone’s face..


~hungarian & ~digital artist

:damphyr:my gallery:damphyr:
:iconintrud-r:
Felosztod a ké.pet vízszintesen és függőlegesen is három egyenlő részre, valamint meghúzod az átlókat is (persze mindezt ké.pzeletben) és az így kapott metszéspontokba helyezed a ké.p fő részeit. Ez a szerkesztési mód azért jó, mert a szemnek is kényelmesebb, mintha a téma teljesen a ké.p közepén lenne :)

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:iconarthame:
köszi szé;pen ^^ :hug:

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..A teardrop is insignificant in a pool of water, but it can touch the soul as it runs down someone’s face..


~hungarian & ~digital artist

:damphyr:my gallery:damphyr:
:iconbroken-rose-petals:
the composition is a little off, i would suggest playing with the hue saturation, i did this on one of my first deviations and received the same advice. other than the composition, the work is very beautiful!!

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the broken petals of the crimson flower lay crushed on the snow
:iconarthame:
thank you for the advice, I'm trying to remake it as soon as I'll get back my notebook (I miss her so much) but now its just a simple pc without Photoshop cs2 :(

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..A teardrop is insignificant in a pool of water, but it can touch the soul as it runs down someone’s face..


~hungarian & ~digital artist

:damphyr:my gallery:damphyr:
:iconbroken-rose-petals:
it is still very beautiful!!! :)

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the broken petals of the crimson flower lay crushed on the snow

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